Sunday, March 15, 2009

boneyard

obelisk towers
on its plinth with no mortar:
faint nausea stirs…

One Single Impression: Farewells
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12 comments:

  1. SandyCarlsonMarch 15, 2009 at 7:30 PM

    Because ends do come, and they disturb.

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  2. Tammie LeeMarch 15, 2009 at 8:22 PM

    look out below.....
    nice~

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  3. endurogirlMarch 15, 2009 at 9:54 PM

    A touch of vertigo? Or just a little insecure anxiety? I keep rereading this and get more nervy each time.

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  4. floretaMarch 16, 2009 at 1:30 AM

    interesting interpretation. dizzying with what should be so sturdy..

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  5. Neverending StoryMarch 16, 2009 at 3:52 AM

    Yes I now the feeling of being mortar-less. This makes me want to shout, "mortar, mortar" like someone at the scene of a fire shouts for water.

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  6. Quiet PathsMarch 16, 2009 at 1:44 PM

    Farewells to feeling grounded; it is not for the faint of heart.

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  7. Tumblewords:March 16, 2009 at 2:09 PM

    Fascinating farewell!

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  8. AmiasMarch 17, 2009 at 12:52 AM

    It's hard when one is not grounded ... it's a sad farewell.

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  9. zoya gautamMarch 18, 2009 at 2:22 AM

    ..what one bids farewell to _does count..lovely..many thanks..

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  10. Cassiopeia RisesMarch 18, 2009 at 10:49 AM

    oH, I hate heights. My family got me to go up one of the (the late) Twin towers. I could not move from the wall. We were never meant to be that high.

    Well done.

    love-bd

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  11. JimMarch 19, 2009 at 6:07 PM

    handsome young fellow
    mama tried drugs got him bad
    sickening death pall

    Mrs. Jim's cousin died of overdose yesterday.

    I'm ready for equals to welcome the spring.
    ..

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  12. BarbMarch 21, 2009 at 4:57 PM

    What an interesting take on the prompt. I'm a bit phobic, myself.

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