Ah, hiding in the fog, the nano-fog. I won't tell if you don't tell but watch those sighs, people may hear. This haiku reminds me of Hotel California, the Eagles' song. I like it (like the song also). ..
I love the fog. I feel safe within its embrace, even when I'm drive. I listen and watch more carefully when I drive in the fog. Your nano-fog is a living thing.
Nicely original.
ReplyDeleteVery 1984. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteYou certainly have your own style of listening.
ReplyDeleteIt is unique.
Ah, hiding in the fog, the nano-fog. I won't tell if you don't tell but watch those sighs, people may hear.
ReplyDeleteThis haiku reminds me of Hotel California, the Eagles' song. I like it (like the song also).
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If chained down is security! Well done.
ReplyDeleteNano-fog... what an interesting idea. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting - it sends my mind off to sort and listen. Love it!
ReplyDeleteI am happy to say .. I got this one! Nice.
ReplyDeleteI love the fog. I feel safe within its embrace, even when I'm drive. I listen and watch more carefully when I drive in the fog. Your nano-fog is a living thing.
ReplyDeleteWhere I'm from there is a lot more vog..your haiku always makes me think! I'm glad I listened-
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your interpretation~ thanks
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