Friday, December 2, 2011

Arthur's Seat

Swinging to dale's rim
Wan rays light the ruin's stones
I raise my collar



Photo credit: hotblack from morguefile.com
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 11, 2012 at 6:45 AM

    Nice sentiment. Ozymandias in haiku. I raise my collar effective image for the ending

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  2. LauraJuly 11, 2012 at 8:58 AM

    lovely write!

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  3. NeniJuly 11, 2012 at 10:51 AM

    nice haiku ...

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  4. Rachel HoytJuly 12, 2012 at 12:13 AM

    Does that rock have a bit of James Dean's style or what? :P Great poem.

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  5. dsnake1July 12, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    i loved the ending. it's like, to hunker down for the night. :)

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  6. hyperCRYPTICalJuly 13, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    Lovely!

    Anna :o]

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