Sunday, January 3, 2010

Vortex

crisp and clear blue sky `
bright crayons loiter to hunt `
swirling goldfish rise `

OSI wings

7 comments:

  1. What wonderful imagery...crisp, indeed! Lovely.

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  2. The imagery is vibrant, alive. Thanks.

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  3. Very nice imagery. Short but poignant.

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  4. wow...a colorful rendition of the prompt...:)

    birds soaring up and down trying to hunt fishes...their reflections like colorful etches in the sky!

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