Sunday, August 26, 2012

spectacles

Summer Triangle
tacked to the blue-black heavens
which star's pointed up?

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9 comments:

  1. GeraldineAugust 26, 2012 at 12:47 PM

    Very clever! :<) Happy Week Bruce.

    www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com

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  2. AnonymousAugust 26, 2012 at 12:52 PM

    yes...a different view...:)

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  3. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsAugust 26, 2012 at 3:59 PM

    Powerful use of the word "tacked" and loved the image of "blue-black". But the final line is a dramatic, disturbing challenge!

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  4. Amrit SinhaAugust 26, 2012 at 4:26 PM

    Innovative concept !!!

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  5. Harshad MehtaAugust 26, 2012 at 10:22 PM

    Interesting Haiku.

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  6. anthonynorthAugust 27, 2012 at 3:44 AM

    Love the last line.

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  7. AnonymousAugust 27, 2012 at 3:21 PM

    whoa ! i had to read it twice to really appreciate this :D

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  8. joanneAugust 27, 2012 at 7:06 PM

    wonderful haiku....too bad I don't get it!

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  9. LocomenteAugust 29, 2012 at 2:09 AM

    Nicely penned...
    On spectacle

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