Friday, October 26, 2012

In My Yard

deer looks up, startled
stands on tip-toes, then settles -
bang go the pot lids

linking to Haiku My Heart
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7 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaOctober 26, 2012 at 1:42 PM

    This creates diverse images in my mind :-)

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  2. LeaNovember 9, 2012 at 6:13 PM

    Me too, startled! your haiku... had done its job well...

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  3. A Bit of the BlarneyNovember 9, 2012 at 6:41 PM

    I'm wondering if the deer bolted at the sound of the lids!!! Very visual haiku!!! Have a wonderful weekend!! Cathy

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  4. BarbaraNovember 9, 2012 at 9:28 PM

    I love that look of a startled deer. Great pictures in my mind with this one. Thanks!

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  5. MaritNovember 10, 2012 at 11:18 AM

    I love the haiku, I can almost picture it!

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  6. KarenNovember 10, 2012 at 12:33 PM

    Thankfully the bang didn't come from a gun!

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  7. Magical Mystical TeacherNovember 11, 2012 at 9:47 AM

    Are you, by any chance, the pot-lid player? :)

    Seven Haiku with Simon

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