Friday, March 1, 2013

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kayak berthed in reeds
warmly lit kitchen window
shore birds ignore us

Linking to Haiku My Heart

11 comments:

  1. Lovely holiday haiku !
    Happy March !

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  2. What a great place to be. It's still too snowy here for paddling.

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  3. The birds were busy with their own world !!!

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  5. I imagine the birds don't care what side of the window we are on. They know we will eventually leave but they always stay.

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  6. haiku sounds very inviting ~ well penned ~ ^_^

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  7. Hope you are enjoying tea in the kitchen. Too cool to kayak out there with the birds.

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  8. Beautiful layered dimensions of worlds outside and inside!

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  9. Kayaking is for the birds :)
    You are a wonderful poet♥

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  10. As well they should!! Love all the delightful layers and meanings in this poem!

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  11. you have blanketed my longing with your warmly lit romantic offering.
    sigh...

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