Sunday, March 1, 2009

boathouse

rainbow soap bubbles,
lawn's captives, reflect french doors:
reeds hedge the peach moon

One Single Impression: Circles
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17 comments:

  1. AmiasMarch 1, 2009 at 3:06 AM

    Yes, I see it, I love bubbles, the image is perfect.

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  2. anthonynorthMarch 1, 2009 at 5:04 AM

    Intriguing images come from this. Excellent.

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  3. SandyCarlsonMarch 1, 2009 at 7:22 AM

    How circles change our perception of boundaries. Sudddenly the hedge can contain the moon.

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  4. Beth P.March 1, 2009 at 9:37 AM

    Many circles within circles here, dear kitehorse.

    carpe bubbles, so to speak!

    Love being on your blog roll--when I get my software updated, you will surely be on mine!

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  5. Sweetest in the GaleMarch 1, 2009 at 11:56 AM

    So much visual imagery in just a few words...I loved this.

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  6. GeraldineMarch 1, 2009 at 12:51 PM

    Absolutely gorgeous! I am soaking up each word.

    Hugs, G

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  7. JimMarch 2, 2009 at 12:09 AM

    Ah, yes, the life of luxury. Clearly not in Charles Dicken's poverty world nor in the realm of my post. But towards the end of Dicken's novels our young heroine may very well be staring out or into those French doors.
    ..

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  8. totomaiMarch 2, 2009 at 8:39 AM

    oh yes really really cool idea. these wont burst anytime soon

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  9. Cassiopeia RisesMarch 2, 2009 at 11:27 AM

    Oh, this is lovely. How nice to read a true Haiku.
    Well done my friend. Beautiful images!


    love-bd

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  10. Tumblewords:March 2, 2009 at 2:15 PM

    Bubble circles - peach moon - beautiful!

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  11. Kate SherrodMarch 2, 2009 at 2:44 PM

    This made me long for summer!

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  12. SweetTalkingGuyMarch 2, 2009 at 8:57 PM

    Beautiful words - they speak to my heart!
    There again, I have got a 'thing' about bubbles in the air!!

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  13. zoya gautamMarch 4, 2009 at 6:27 AM

    ..great imagery..many thanks..

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  14. Tammie LeeMarch 4, 2009 at 12:53 PM

    simple words
    take me to your place
    lovely

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  15. PattiMarch 4, 2009 at 7:37 PM

    "rainbow soap bubbles,
    lawn's captives,"...perfect! Beautiful poem

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  16. mardeMarch 5, 2009 at 8:27 PM

    From the delicacy of bubbles with their mirrored doors
    following the reeds to the moon -
    a beautiful journey in a moment!

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  17. DorothiMarch 11, 2009 at 7:30 AM

    lovely imagery..how very few words can convey so much...Thanks for sharing!! Keep writing!!

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