Sunday, December 27, 2009

Jag

Cows wander grumbling.
Pure, kindhearted, sagging clouds.
Rippling, slowly, pale.

Haiku Bones prompt: regret

No, I am not a vegetarian, and even that is killing complex living systems - but I do regret the innate cruelty of the "circle of life" sometimes.

7 comments:

  1. Yes, excactly. There seems to be in every action a sobering consequence.

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  2. I do like the typo, somehow the CAC part makes me think of cow dung ZOMG !! I make typos all the time and it shows how walled in we are from each other by language and by writing, and yet are still able to transmit feelings and ideas !!!

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  3. I enjoyed this...the second line creates a beautiful visual.

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  4. I love your descriptions of the cows -- they are kindhearted clouds! thank you!

    ~angie

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  5. Ah, yes. The butterfly effect is always a surprise, I think. Lovely work!

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