Sunday, December 27, 2009

Memory

snowy bird gusting,
puddle clouds slide dimly back.
rain in sour tide pool.

Haiku Bones prompt #3 regret
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8 comments:

  1. fourwindshaigaDecember 27, 2009 at 10:00 AM

    Wonderful first line. Very nice.

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  2. ChristineDecember 27, 2009 at 11:27 AM

    Wow, Bruce. Quite excellent.

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  3. Sweetest in the GaleDecember 27, 2009 at 4:44 PM

    Loved the images this evoked! Wonderful.

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  4. Tumblewords:December 27, 2009 at 5:12 PM

    Love the imagery - puddle clouds - brilliant!

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  5. angieDecember 27, 2009 at 5:21 PM

    fantastic word choices -- gusting, puddle, sour! love it! thank you!

    and that font? it says "papyrus" on my paint program -- I picked it for the name! ;)

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  6. zoya gautamDecember 28, 2009 at 1:44 AM

    .. yes , great word choices , not run of the mill ..

    thanks for this bruce ..

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  7. Nancy Bea MillerDecember 28, 2009 at 8:59 AM

    Nice piece...it evokes a rainy morning down by the ocean's edge.

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  8. gautami tripathyDecember 28, 2009 at 9:23 AM

    Love the image of snowy bird gusting...

    a start

    Also don't forget to post any of your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited!

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