Thursday, January 7, 2010

HAIKU: alar lea

breezy atmosphere
zephyr-strained flowers ripple
without pulling air

One Single Impression

Petals sure do look like wings sometimes. Tried to fit this in a 3-line 17 syllable haiku poem. May have lost some of the imagery through tersity :(
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6 comments:

  1. SandyCarlsonJanuary 8, 2010 at 6:40 AM

    Beautiful. There is grace in the passivity of these flowers. Somehow.

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  2. ShraddhaJanuary 8, 2010 at 11:20 AM

    very nicely done!!

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  3. Tumblewords:January 8, 2010 at 1:42 PM

    I like this! It's strong, graceful and makes a wonderful picture of petals.

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  4. Nancy Bea MillerJanuary 8, 2010 at 5:12 PM

    I like it!

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  5. Loch RobJanuary 9, 2010 at 7:47 AM

    I have an image of a field of flowers, softly blowing, in a morning breeze.

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  6. gabrielleJanuary 11, 2010 at 12:38 AM

    How little they ask. Lovely!

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