Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Haiku: gokku


Look around, love you!
I walk I will be your child.
I have seen tonight.

Haiku Bones

3 comments:

  1. So lovely, that last line is wonderful.

    I didn't see your name on the Haikubones link list this time. Glad I didn't miss seeing your haiku.

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  2. .. expressions of classical thought

    [ howsoever much modernism , so called ,brings in a sense of the synthetic - _ classicism - stays! ]

    ur ' mikoshi ' haiku is also so full of life

    many thanks walky ..

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  3. So lovely. Thank you for sharing.

    Melanie

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