Friday, August 17, 2012

bark

wet london plane tree
splotches on top of splotches
sun's just coming out

linking to Haiku My Heart Friday
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10 comments:

  1. joanneAugust 17, 2012 at 1:02 PM

    but will the sun stay out for long? well-written, espec. the 'splotches - great , descriptive word....

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  2. anthonynorthAugust 17, 2012 at 1:23 PM

    Hoping that sun stays out. It's shy where i am.

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  3. LeaAugust 17, 2012 at 2:01 PM

    It makes me think of the diamonds that appear when the sun shines through the dampness. Love the bark described as splotches.

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  4. KarenAugust 17, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    Oh, we need splotches here!

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  5. carol l mckennaAugust 17, 2012 at 5:16 PM

    ...splotches on top of splotches ~ Love the phrase ~ great haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  6. Fran aka RedondowriterAugust 17, 2012 at 7:22 PM

    No pictures needed to exquisitely draw a picture of my own in my head from your words. Thanks.

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  7. rebeccaAugust 18, 2012 at 8:00 AM

    i love the intimacy of your haiku...and the promise it holds!

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  8. Bonita RoseAugust 18, 2012 at 9:22 AM

    sunshine invigorates the soul. xo

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  9. Amrit SinhaAugust 18, 2012 at 9:40 AM

    Sunshine and leaves ... the life giving combo !!!

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  10. Jennifer WagnerAugust 18, 2012 at 1:37 PM

    Nice! And I love your blog name :)

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