Friday, August 31, 2012

takeout

dumpling steam rises
old exhaust fan roars and pulls
clean, white cardboard waits

Linking to Haiku My Heart Friday

8 comments:

  1. YUM!
    Can you hear my belly rumbling?

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  2. Yum, is the first word for me as well! I can smell, hear, taste, feel, and see this haiku!

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  3. Lovely 'tasting' haiku! Enjoy your diner!

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  4. I hear the sounds and sniff the fragrances. Your words have drawn me in.

    The Color of Fire

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  5. delicious dim sum haiku!
    thanks for being here at haiku my heart and igniting my appetite!

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  6. oh yum. the best sort to place to eat.

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