Friday, July 6, 2012

fan

Linking back to Haiku My Heart

Interesting how the twirling fan blades stutter slowly in the video.



barn fan blows burred noise
bits of hay twine hold the cage
cobwebs shake slightly

9 comments:

  1. Very interesting image. Amazed at how the blades move. Your haiku is descriptive enough that I can see with my imagination the bits of twine, dust and spiderwebs fluttering in the created breeze. Cool stuff!

    Peace

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    1. I'm relying on Spadoman's imagination, since my own seems to have fled--or have been blown away by a stuttering fan.

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  2. This all takes me back in time... when I was a child... the barn, cobwebs, twine, the fan spinning... I could almost begin to imagine the fan speaking your haiku, the words becoming the power to make the blades spin...

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  3. well crafted haiku ~ love barns ~ must be hard to keep kool ~~ thanks ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  4. unique photo and haiky....i remember those wonderful metal, noisy fans, but they did the job!

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  5. not good. this makes me desperate to houseclean!

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  6. "cobwebs shake slightly" great imagery!

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  7. Interesting post! I like your haiku and that you combine it with a video :)

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  8. Due to computer problems, I'm late visiting the haiku circle, but here I am - enjoying your video and haiku.

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