Wednesday, July 11, 2012

saltine

Linking to Sensational Haiku Wednesday #159: "heat"

yellowed sidewalk groans
as sun bends its saltine scores ~
it never cracks there

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9 comments:

  1. anthonynorthJuly 11, 2012 at 10:30 AM

    That's quite a middle line. Certainly no cracks in your haiku.

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  2. joanneJuly 11, 2012 at 11:15 AM

    now, why doesn't it crack there? Today's conundrum....nicely written haiku

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  3. carol l mckennaJuly 11, 2012 at 6:28 PM

    well penned haiku ~ like the line ....as sun bends its saltine scores ~ thanks, ^_^ ( A Creative Harbor)

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 11, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    Never trust the sun to do what you want it to do--or when, either!

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  5. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsJuly 11, 2012 at 11:38 PM

    Beautiful sizzling sound in the second line!

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    1. Bruce MillerJuly 12, 2012 at 5:54 PM

      Well I didn't even notice that until you pointed it out; very cool!

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  6. kaykualaJuly 12, 2012 at 7:01 AM

    Yes, the strength of the sun is evident! Well crafted Bruce!

    Hank

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  7. Kathy ReedJuly 12, 2012 at 10:40 AM

    Appropo photo to go with your great haiku..

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  8. Amrit SinhaJuly 14, 2012 at 6:14 AM

    Power of the sun, and nature !!!

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