Monday, March 12, 2012

enshrined

Fiber, wire, tin, wood;
The flesh and sides of old toys.
Reliquaries all.

photo: USA Nat'l Park Svc.


Haiku Heights prompt: Childhood
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5 comments:

  1. The Write GirlMarch 12, 2012 at 10:32 PM

    Our old toys are relics of the past. Nice haiku!

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 13, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    You missed fabric! I still have my old teddy bear from childhood---with all the fuzz worn off.

    After Childhood

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    1. Bruce MillerMarch 13, 2012 at 5:59 PM

      How right you are! I've changed my poem to add "fiber" and I like it better now. Thanks for the good tip.

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  3. becca givensMarch 15, 2012 at 1:10 AM

    Quite nice collection of memories!

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  4. AnonymousJuly 21, 2012 at 2:00 PM

    Love the old toys!! Very well written!

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