Wednesday, March 28, 2012

Fiction

Pollen-coated glass --
One fat raindrop zigzags down
A certain pathway.


Photo credit: wintersixfour from morguefile.com

Sensational Haiku

Linking to Sensational Haiku Wednesday prompt "fiction"
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14 comments:

  1. carol l mckennaMarch 28, 2012 at 10:08 AM

    Delightful haiku and awesome photo ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  2. AnonymousMarch 28, 2012 at 10:18 AM

    What a metaphor--love watching raindrops squiggle down windowpanes, building up more and more momentum. :)

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  3. anthonynorthMarch 28, 2012 at 10:32 AM

    Yep, great metaphor.

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  4. UnknownMarch 28, 2012 at 12:17 PM

    Very nicely done. I like the imagery.

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  5. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?March 28, 2012 at 1:33 PM

    Whose fiction is this?
    A buzzing bee? The raindrop?
    Mother Nature's book...

    ;)

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  6. G-ManMarch 28, 2012 at 2:59 PM

    Ahhhhh Chew!

    Very realistic...:-)

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  7. HelenMarch 28, 2012 at 8:18 PM

    Love the pairing of your haiku and the image ....

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  8. Tara TylerMarch 28, 2012 at 9:14 PM

    beautiful! who would have thought pollen could be!

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  9. AnonymousMarch 28, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    Lovely imagination with the rain drop :)

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  10. HazelMarch 28, 2012 at 11:10 PM

    WOOT! I love this! I used to watch 'fat raindrops zigzagging down' window panes, crying because I wasn't allowed to play in the rain. Thanks for a haiku that brought back fond childhood memories.

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  11. The Poetic HomemakerMarch 29, 2012 at 1:26 PM

    Great imagery, though I must admit I am a bit confused by the poem's title.

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  12. zongrikMarch 30, 2012 at 1:27 AM

    great pic

    the fat raindrop is some image

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  13. A Walk In My HeartMarch 30, 2012 at 7:46 AM

    Very well crafted haiku.

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  14. Gowri MohanakrishnanMarch 30, 2012 at 11:26 PM

    'Fiction'! Wonderful title.

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