your wild jokes are disturbing.
but you're right of course.
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| photo: morguefile.com, pinhed |
I wrote this haiku for Haiku my Heart because I've just discovered the Sufi poet Hafiz in Daniel Ladinsky's translation The Gift. Like Rumi, but more raucously ecstatic.
Linking to Haiku my Heart Friday
Can feel the tension in the words! Brief and to the point! Well done! Cathy
ReplyDeletegood morning bruce. so glad you are here in the tilt-a-whirl rush of friday morning with haiku my heart.
ReplyDeletei love a little raucous in a bold haiku, so glad you are here putting your spin on things.
Unique haiku ~ well expressed ~ thanks namaste, Carol ^_^
ReplyDeleteOh wow... I love your haiku - it's so different and, as Rebecca says, I love your spin to it. You make me smile! I'm already looking forward to next Friday, I hope to see another one coming then!
ReplyDeletePlease disturb me more, so I can break out of myself and this tilt-a-whirl I find myself in! Great haiku and your own spin on Hafiz! I think he would jump on the ride as well!
ReplyDelete"but you're right" - I didn't expect that; made me smile. What a fun haiku! Thanks for dropping by my nook and for your sweet analysis of my haiku. Have a nice weekend.
ReplyDeleteLife is a wild ride, great haiku/photo!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku. Life is indeed a wild ride and you have caught it so well in this awesome haiku.
ReplyDeleteI do believe I can feel the speaker gritting his teeth here! :)
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What a fun haiku - in a sort of in-your-face way! I love the picture, as well - makes me think of childhood county fairs.
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