Wednesday, March 14, 2012

Excitement

Still backwater hums.
Stale bread tumbles from my hand:
Plop ! Boiling with koi !
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Linking to Sensational Haiku Wednesday prompt: excite(/ment)




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13 comments:

  1. G-ManMarch 14, 2012 at 9:44 AM

    A roiling school of Sunburst Carp.
    Love it!

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  2. KarenMarch 14, 2012 at 10:20 AM

    "Boiling with Koi". love that line. A great description of a feeding frenzy!

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  3. carol l mckennaMarch 14, 2012 at 10:24 AM

    Neat haiku ~ great photo ~ thanks ~namaste, Carol ^_^

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  4. RiaMarch 14, 2012 at 3:40 PM

    My mom used to have a koi pond - I loved feeding them.

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  5. Tyrean MartinsonMarch 14, 2012 at 8:02 PM

    Nice haiku - "boiling with koi" is perfect!

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 14, 2012 at 10:54 PM

    I just saw a koi pond today, so I find your vignette particularly delightful! Thank you! :)

    Fevered Excitement


    Would you please consider using only comment moderation and forgetting about Blogger's new, and very-difficult-to-read word verification? My eyes will thank you!

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    1. Bruce MillerMarch 15, 2012 at 3:29 PM

      I hate the word verification and did not know it was turned on by default. Thanks for letting me know and I will try to find where to turn it off in this new improved version of Blogger.

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  7. becca givensMarch 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    Great job!!

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  8. AnonymousMarch 15, 2012 at 1:45 AM

    Nice! "boiling with koi" especially

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  9. Tara TylerMarch 15, 2012 at 7:53 AM

    excited fish, exciting to watch!

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  10. Kathy ReedMarch 15, 2012 at 4:13 PM

    Great haiku with color!

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  11. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?March 19, 2012 at 10:55 AM

    Definitely exciting! Love the "boiling with koi" line :)

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  12. MISHMarch 19, 2012 at 3:27 PM

    The image matches perfectly with the haiku!

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